W.A.L.T- Write an ode for a body part.
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Success Criteria
Choose an ordinary place, object or thing
Give your subject praise or thanks
Speak directly to the object
Use descriptive vocabulary to bring the object to life- ( personification)
Use repeated lines
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Ode to my Abs
Oh! How I miss you dearly.
I had all 6 of you hard as rocks,
but now…
But now like a fox you have snuck away .
Two of you faintly,
are still hopefully here to stay.
You made my nickname so real
and the happiness I would feel,
when people say...
“ Bet you don’t have abs!
Probably have flabs!”
They were wrong, so wrong!
You complimented me so nicely,
but I must admit at times you were pricey💵
All the sit-ups and crunches,
Not being able to have that piece of cake🍰
in my school lunches!
Oh, how I do miss you dearly,
But now I must stop before I get teary😢
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Reflection
😊- I really like how my poem has used rhyming .
😇- I think that I have used all of the success criteria well.
😖 - Next time I think I could do a more 'helpful' body part.
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