Friday, 26 February 2016

Apocalypse Short Film- Scene Descriptions

WALT- Add detail to our writing to describe a setting.

This week in class we watched a short film called Apocalypse. We had to chose a scene to describe. I have done one about when they are in their room/house. My other one is about a school playground in the short film.


Apocalypse
Run-down and crusty, the school playground sadly weeps away. No one playing on their accessories. No one laughing and giggling. Alone… Rustling leaves and a few dead rodents whisper in the mouldy corners. Creeeeeek! The swings shake, moving back and forth, back and forth…

Apocalypse 2
Here is this room sitting alone. Crusty and dull, nothing much to it. A few bits and a bobs lying around, some water…. Eerie, you might say. Lights flicker like a dying firefly. The loose screw door rattles away. Here is this room sitting alone...

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Portrait Poem

Corri Is A Firework


Image result for fireworkCorri is a firework waiting to explode.


She is like a star that will never stop rising.

Image result for firework
If you get her on the right day
she is a beautiful, helpful person.


She can bring you happiness or tears!

It is like she has little, mini  fireworks
inside her bright eyes.


But watch out…
she might send sparks flying!

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This is my portrait poem. To be successful you had to include a metaphor and a simile.


Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Term 1 Goals - Tagul

Hi! Thanks for taking the time to read my first blog post. Please comment one of your goals...

This is my Tagul. All the words inside are my term 1 goals. Some of my goals for this term are...

*Start reading for pleasure not because I have to.
*Step outside my comfort zone eg. try new sports.     
*To know every time table instantly.
*Keep earning every possible gold points to go towards my honours badge.