To be successful we needed to use at least 3 of the 5 senses, have 3 or more verses and have some sort of repetition after each verse. (eg. Mahia is like that.)
My Special Place
I walk in there and automatically,
a smiles grows upon my face.
I feel as free as a bird,
as the adrenal pumps in my lungs.
I can’t wait to start.
My special place is like that.
5,6,7,8! The music booms and
the passion of performing is released.
The tappers will tap while others pant
and stretch till we can hardly walk!
But it all is worth it.
My special place is like that.
Faint smells of b.o, deodorant
and hairspray are all normal
Don’t mind the the slight mess
I love it here just like the rest.
My Dance Studio is like that.
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